(An A to Z Challenge entry)
A valley so deep, digging into earth,
trying to find a single drop of comfort.
My heart feels like an oasis in the desert.
A room so dark, blinding to the eye,
trying to find a single moment of light.
My mind feels like a prisoner in the Box.
A night so cold, freezing to my skin,
trying to find a single breath of warmth.
My body feels like water in the freezer.
But you’re gone.
I long for
One more drop of love,
One more moment to look,
One more breath to embrace.
But you’re gone
and
I am not ready
to let you go.
😦 I really like ending, though it leaves you on a sad/depressed note. Not that the rest was exactly upbeat lol
Thank you. Sometimes my best works tend to be very emotional and often depressing. Guess I am EMO in that way.
Exactly. I have felt exactly like this before.
❤ Grief is hard – for everyone, in their own ways.